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Post by Spotchfur and Torquestripe on Feb 14, 2006 17:45:50 GMT -5
**Spotchpaw smiles at the thought of healing her friend. She then beams at Icestar's response** I will try harder to be more calm... and wise.
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Post by Icestar on Feb 14, 2006 23:01:18 GMT -5
**The leader nodded solemnly and smiled.** Very well.. Off you go now. It's late, and I'm sure you will be wanting to get some rest.
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Post by peach on Feb 18, 2006 17:50:55 GMT -5
*Amitapaw nods a good night to everyone and sets off on her way. she decides to go south, down by ThunderClan's border. she silently slips through the undergrowth, sense alert for anything new. the chirruping of crickets sooths her* man, i've got to stay focused * she softly mutters and then trots faster until she's at the border. lowering herself slightly she opens her mouth and breaths deeply, the scents of RiverClan strong in her nose. she walks further south; the scent still strong. the night breeze stirs the leaves high above her. she glances up and takes a moment to stare in wonder at the stars and then continues to walk the border* whoo, who!! *Amiatpaw slightly jumps and looks up to see two glowing amber eyes staring at her* it's only an owl, no big. though it'll teach me to daydream *presently she came to a spot in the border where ThunderClan's scent was slightly overpowering. she stops a quick second to rescent it and then loops around in a semi circle* it's most likely time to be going back in, wouldn't want to keep anyone waiting *Amiatpaw slips off into the underbrush back towards the camp and her bed*
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Post by Icestar on Feb 21, 2006 19:33:10 GMT -5
OOC: Very good, Amitapaw! Thank you for taking the time to post. It really does help me a lot.
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Post by Whisperstar, Dewpaw & Skypaw on Feb 25, 2006 20:36:20 GMT -5
*Whisperpaw steps up to Icestar, he voice soft and quiet.* Icestar, what can I do, sir?
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Post by Icestar on Feb 25, 2006 22:17:41 GMT -5
**The solemn leader turned to the young she-cat and smiled gently.** Hello, Whisperpaw. I'm glad you're here. I want you to patrol the borders for me. Check for weak areas in the scent mark, and make certain not to get distracted. So don't wonder off after a mouse. You can pursue hunting later. **He gave her a dismissive wink and turned to stalk off to his den beneath Fallen Oak and into its shadows.**
OOC: Okay. Just post what you see, smell, hear, etc. Their should not be any major problems or conflicts. In fact, I don't want you posting your character meeting any other cats on their journey. This is simply an evaluation test of sorts to assist me, so I can see where everyone is at in their RPing.
If you need more tips, look back a couple of pages. I put some guidliners and basic rules.
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Post by legolasg on Feb 26, 2006 17:58:23 GMT -5
*Flamepaw appears and sits to wait for instructions*
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Post by Whisperstar, Dewpaw & Skypaw on Feb 27, 2006 20:43:15 GMT -5
*Whisperfur nodds and smiles, then bounds out of camp. Slowing down she heads East towards the Windclan boarder, her paws light and quick. She slinks carefully along the river, careful to stay hidden among the grasses of the bank. The sound of the water calms her as it always has and she walks on. Here the scent of Windclan is strong, and she scents that a Windclan patrol may have passed not an hour before. Opening her jaws she scents watervole, but she ignores it and her ever rumbling stomach, moving stealthly onward. She sees no movement on the other side of the river and she walks on, the wind rustles through the grass around her. A fish splashes in the river making her jump at the sudden noise. It's just a fish. It's alright, calm down. she murmurs to herself. After another reassuring sniff at the border to make sure her clan's scent is still fresh she finishes her route and heads back to her clan and her awaiting nest.*
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Post by Icestar on Mar 2, 2006 19:15:56 GMT -5
Flamepaw. **Icestar emerged from the shadows of his den beneath Fallen Oak and trotted briskly to the firy apprentice.** Patrol the South and West borders..OOC: Follow the same instructions I gave to Whisperpaw. Okay. Whisperpaw - Very good! It was nice and neat. And I must say, as silly and stupid as it sounds, untidy typing and grammar have always bugged me. You did good. It, as I have noted before on your posting, was very well done, 'cause it was neither overodone, nor skimpy. ;D
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Post by Whisperstar, Dewpaw & Skypaw on Mar 4, 2006 23:13:55 GMT -5
OOC: Thanks Icestar!
BIC: *Whisperpaw walks back into camp on quick brisk paws, happy to be finally home again. She looks around at the quiet camp and walks over to her leader. She sits and waits in a respectful silence until he is done with Flamepaw so she may make her report.*
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Post by Icestar on Mar 13, 2006 18:56:54 GMT -5
**The leader turned impatient with waiting for Flamepaw's response.** She doesn't need to say "yes, sir!".. **He grinned as he spotted Whipserpaw trotting towards him.** Whisperpaw. Your report, please.
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Post by Whisperstar, Dewpaw & Skypaw on Mar 14, 2006 17:48:08 GMT -5
*Whisperpaw bows her head respectfully before she begins.* I went along the river and towards the Windclan boarder. A Windclan patrol must have just passed before I got there, but all is quiet, sir. Our scent there is still srong. *She says, steadily, finishing her report.*
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Post by krason on Mar 16, 2006 18:40:49 GMT -5
*A grey cat with black spots and a white stripe bounds up and waits for instructions, if any*
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Post by Whisperstar, Dewpaw & Skypaw on Mar 16, 2006 21:21:29 GMT -5
*Dewpaw trots quickly over from where she had been sleeping in her den over to where Icestar is. She gives a long stretch She smiles at Smallpaw as she waits for her own instructions egarly.*
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Post by Icestar on Mar 17, 2006 18:09:05 GMT -5
**Icestar had just nodded dutifully and given Whisperfur his thanks when the anxious apprentices approached him. He smiled, a merry delight to see, and spoke in a rather pleased manner.** Well now! Isn't that a sight, Whisperfur? Look at the bright future generation of RiverClan warriors. **He smiled still and flashed a glance at Whisperfur before redirecting his gaze on the apprentices.** Now.. Since you are all here, I suppose I should have you go in a group. He motioned towards Whisperfur.** Whisperfur, your deputy, will lead you, Smallpaw. Dewpaw, you will be with me. **At this point he turned to Whisperfur, speaking more lowly.** I will take the western route to scout out the northern border. You can head south and east to check on our border with ThunderClan. **He swiveled sharply, raising his voice again, and glanced upon Dewpaw, then Smallpaw.** Remember, always be alert, cautious, and apprehensive. Curiosity ((despite the stupid two-leg saying)) will not kill you as long as if you couple it with sense.. **He started to march for the land bridge, but added over his shoulder.** Oh, and don't forget to always respect your leader and his/her judgment. **He glanced pointedly at Smallpaw and winked.** Alright! Off we go! Hup two, young miss! **The silver tabby trotted briskly for the narrow sandbar that connected RiverClan camp to the dry fields and sparse woods of RiverClan territory.**
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