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Post by SilverSTAR and SoulWIND! on Feb 5, 2006 15:38:50 GMT -5
**silverpaw smells some more, yet, sudenly, the cent gets lighter... why?** Icestar? why has the cent or Riverclan gotten lighter? you can now barely smell it.
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Post by Icestar on Feb 5, 2006 23:34:49 GMT -5
**The leader, who was patiently trailing the two young apprentices, replies with a simple, matter-of-fact tone.** Sometimes borders tend to weaken after time.. Especially in rain. Just remark it. **He is glad that they could tell that the border had decreased its intensity greatly.** OOC: Okay. You guys are doing good.. Very good. But try to lengthen your posts a bit. Add as much description and character to your posts as possible.. The patrol should be about wrapped up, now. So let's move this along. After this patrol finishes, you two can go on another, this one by yourselves, so I can better evaluate your skills. Remember, apprentices, though upgraded by RPing skills, can still show knowledge and some descent experience in warrior-hood as well. So I encourage you to go for it.. I don't mind if you boost your characters skills even more. ^-^
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Post by Silverpaw logged out on Feb 6, 2006 14:03:46 GMT -5
**silverpaw dsuddnely closes her eyes, & sniffs the air, feeling teh cool breese on her fur. she slowly opns them again, & sees, but more smells camp up ahead. she talks, a bit jumpy yet says her words smoothly** camp! I a bit smell camp. we must be very close! ah, teh smell of fresh-kill. new kits being born... Riverclan is sometimes paradice!
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Post by Spotchfur and Torquestripe on Feb 6, 2006 19:22:18 GMT -5
**Spotchpaw sniffs and smells the smells that Silverpaw said** Ah the wonderful Riverclan. **She continues onward, opening her scent glands. She stops for a moment, sniffs, and licks her lips** This is a good hunting ground. I would like to go hunting, but we have to go on this territorial patrol. No cat, but a Riverclanner will get past here. **She continues on her little path. She wants to jump at the wondeful peacfulness of the Riverclan, but she knows that Icestar is watching their every move**
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Post by SilverSTAR and SoulWIND! on Feb 7, 2006 18:11:43 GMT -5
**Silverpaw listens to what Spotchpaw said, & speaks a bit quickly.** I too am happy for that this may be a good hunting ground, & happy that it is almost fresh-kill time! **she too licks her lips, & opens her mouth, letting her smell-glans work what they have to work. all the excellent smells, the cool breeze, Silverpaw almost forgets what she is doing, then almost falls. she shakes her head, to snap back to consentration & yet, she keeps walking,**
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Post by Spotchfur and Torquestripe on Feb 7, 2006 18:27:21 GMT -5
**Spotchpaw giggles quietly** Don't ferget our duty. Must be alert for anything that crosses our path! **Though she tries to ct like she pays no attnetion to the prey, Spotchpaw lets the delishous smell come to her**
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Post by Icestar on Feb 7, 2006 19:40:16 GMT -5
**Icestar chuckles quietly at the two's wistful thinking.** Just keep your mind on your job.. Like Spotchpaw said, we must be alert for anything. So do not let your mind wander too far. **He is still smiling as he pads at a trot through the serene forest. The solemn trunks stand as pillars in a courtroom, majestic and powerful. The underbrush ruffles his belly fur and scratches against his sides as he pushes past, ignoring the brush entirely.** Come, Silverpaw and Spotchpaw. We are here. **The gentle, subduing sounds of the steadily flowing water fill the still air with their caressing noise. The tide laps over the smooth, round pebbles on the shore. Icestar briskly trots to the narrow land bridge that connects the island where RiverClan camp is located. He moves swiftly over the slim, sandy bank till his paws press against the cool sandy soil of the camp.**
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Post by SilverSTAR and SoulWIND! on Feb 7, 2006 21:42:54 GMT -5
**Silvertail lets out a great smile; though keeping her scences alert. she walks carefully accross the bridge, placing all 4 paws donw on teh rich sandy siol & finally reaches camp.her vioce is calm, effectionate, & loving** hope sweet home! RiverClan is strong, yet, it is paradice!
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Post by Spotchfur and Torquestripe on Feb 7, 2006 22:50:02 GMT -5
**Spotchpaw walks behind the two, making sure her black paws do not tough thew water** Yip. The strong Riverclan.
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Post by SilverSTAR and SoulWIND! on Feb 8, 2006 8:25:32 GMT -5
**Silvertail smells the air once more** it seems, that teh fresh kill pile has been on not long. maybe teh queens & elders & kits are finished.
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Post by Spotchfur and Torquestripe on Feb 8, 2006 17:16:34 GMT -5
Hopefully. I starved. **As if on que her stomche grumbles** See?
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Post by Icestar on Feb 8, 2006 17:22:50 GMT -5
**The leader raises an eyebrow at the younger cats' eager comments of food, hoping that they will respect their elders, and the queens. He pauses a moment and address the two.** Thank you for your services on the patrol.. It was a good learning experience for you both. Now. You are free to do as you please.. (Within the camp rules, of course! ;D)OOC: If either of you wish to do another patrol, let me know. Icestar will be hanging out around Fallen Oak. I would request that your next patrols be done "uno" style.. In other words, do them on your own. I ask this because I want to see how you handle yourselves on your own. (Remember, the patrols are like an evaluation test.. I'll be observing the ups and downs. )
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Post by Spotchfur and Torquestripe on Feb 8, 2006 17:25:16 GMT -5
**She almost runs off, but stops herslef** Thank you Icestar. **And with that, she races off to the fresh kill pile**
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Post by silvertail logged out on Feb 8, 2006 21:56:07 GMT -5
**silvertail aslo stops & looks into Icestar's Ice-blue eyes** I too would like to thank you....dearly. **she then does a quick jump & dashes off to the fresh-kill pile**
OOC: gee, I wonder why Silvertail keeps loooking into Icestar's eyes?
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Post by Spotchfur and Torquestripe on Feb 8, 2006 22:00:54 GMT -5
OOC: I've noticed almosted everyttime it says, 'She looks into Icestar's ice-blue eyes' BIC: Come on Silvertail!! Let's get there quickley! My stomache won't hold much longer!
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