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Post by sunpaw on Mar 11, 2006 15:04:56 GMT -5
*Sunpaw padded, or more like bounced, into the training clearing, smiling at the cats around her. The tip of her tail twitched back and forth in anticipation as she sat down by Dawnpaw, a huge grin on her tabby face.* Hello, Dawnpaw! I'm waitin' to see if Kempfur wants to train. What are you doing here? *The brown tabby she-cat tilted her head to the side as she waited for her fellow apprentice's answer.*
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Post by StarClan on Mar 11, 2006 15:42:17 GMT -5
~~~~New session~~~~ **Rowanstar, the young leader of WindClan padded serenely into the clearing, casting a glance over her shoulder. Hopefully, her two apprentices were still following her. Turning her gaze back to the clearing, the lithe tortoiseshell walked to the other side of the sandy hollow, then turned and sat, wrapping her long tail around her paws. Narrowing her eyes, she watched for the two apprentices, wanting to begin training before sunhigh.**
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Post by Dawnpaw on Mar 11, 2006 16:01:37 GMT -5
((Warning: i'm going to a theater to see a movie, so I'll be gone a while.))
**Dawnpaw bounds into the clearing after Rowanstar. She's so excited, she's almost bursting for joy. She nods respectfully to her mentor and leader.** Good morning, Rowanstar.
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Post by StarClan on Mar 11, 2006 19:58:54 GMT -5
**Rowanstar smiled kindly at the young apprentice as she returns the nod and the greeting.** Good morning, Dawnpaw. I trust you rested well, after last night's excitement? **The she-cat kept an ear turned towards the entrance, listening for her other aprentice.**
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Post by Dawnpaw on Mar 11, 2006 20:10:07 GMT -5
**Dawnpaw stretches, also listening for Mosspaw.** Very well, thank-you, Rowanstar. So, **she looks back toward the entrance, then back to Rowanstar.** we'll wait for Mosspaw before we start?
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Post by StarClan on Mar 11, 2006 20:12:06 GMT -5
**Rowanstar nodded.** Hmm, yes, we will, unless she takes too long, in which case she'll have to catch up when she arrives. **The leader lifted a mottled brown-orange-and-black paw, licking it daintily as she watched how Dawnpaw handled having to wait.**
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Post by Mosspaw& Aquapaw on Mar 11, 2006 20:42:37 GMT -5
*Mosspaw bounds into the clearing, making sure to not hit Rowanstar or Kempfur.She politly nods twards Rowanstar* Hi I came for that training session with Dawnpaw! I hoe I didn't disturb you
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Post by Dawnpaw on Mar 11, 2006 20:47:43 GMT -5
**Dawnpaw nods, smiling, to Mosspaw.** Hi, Mosspaw. We were waiting for you so we could start. **She gives her front paw a quick lick, then stands and looks, expectantly, at Rowanstar to begin their traing session.**
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Post by StarClan on Mar 11, 2006 21:34:32 GMT -5
OOC: Mosspaw, I believe you meant Rowanstar or Dawnpaw, not Kempfur.
BIC: **Rowanstar smiled at the two apprentices.** No, of course not. Good, now that we're all here, let's get started. First of all, let's see what level you're at. Dawnpaw, attack Mosspaw. **Rowanstar stepped back to give the two cats space and sat down, watching the fight intently.**
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Post by Dawnpaw on Mar 12, 2006 22:40:43 GMT -5
**Dawnpaw nods.** Okay. **She crouches, facing Mosspaw. Her ears flick intently, eyes fixed, watching for an opening. Then, without warning she lunges forward, swiping a sheathed paw at Mosspaw's head. with a growl.**
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Post by Mosspaw& Aquapaw on Mar 13, 2006 19:50:53 GMT -5
*Mosspaw, who was not expestig the attack only narrowly dodges the flying paw. She leeps up and sweeps a paw twords Dawnpaw's belly, hoping to cach her of ballance* OOC: I can't play very long every day so you might have to wait a little while for me to post again, I hope thats O.K.
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Post by StarClan on Mar 13, 2006 21:36:35 GMT -5
OOC: That's fine, Mosspaw, just let me know if you're going to be gone longer than, say, a week so I can train with Dawnpaw alone, 'kay?
Okay, as a mentor and leader, it's part of my job to improve your RPing--that's a big part of becoming a warrior. So here's what I want you to work on:
Dawnpaw--I want you to check over your posts closer, especially when we're training. I know you can't modify as a guest, so you've gotta be extra-careful when you press 'post reply' that your post is ready, 'kay?
Mosspaw--First of all, use proper punctuation. You need to put periods at the ends of your sentences, even when there's an asterisk there. For example-- **Rowanstar nodded her head** Incorrect **Rowanstar nodded her head.** Correct I used to do the very same thing, and it greatly helped my RPing when I started doing it correctly. Now, secondly, I want you to either check your spelling or use the spell-check. 'expesting' is not a word. Nor is 'leeps'. See my point?
Feel free to ask me any questions, and if I don't know the answer, I'll find out, 'kay?
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Post by Dawnpaw on Mar 14, 2006 16:55:08 GMT -5
((Warning: I probably won't be able to go to the Gathering. My weekday comp. access is now very limited. Rowanstar, I'll probably be getting an account very soon.))
**Dawnpaw is caught offguard by the blow and tumbles backwards. She gets up and leaps towards Mosspaw, paws outstretched.**
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Post by dawncloud on Mar 14, 2006 21:17:16 GMT -5
When's our next training session?
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Post by dawncloud on Mar 14, 2006 21:18:57 GMT -5
What do I do next, Rowanstar?
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